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#1 Posted 30 July 2010 - 09:51 AM
Not really much I can say about this one. I made it to experiment with lighting more and I kinda like the outcome.
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Beautiful and innocent, suitable and militant
Are scripted on the walls of the cubicle I'm living in
I'm different, if you take away that I'm gone
A heart on my sleeve, with a razorblade jacket on
Are scripted on the walls of the cubicle I'm living in
I'm different, if you take away that I'm gone
A heart on my sleeve, with a razorblade jacket on
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#2 Posted 30 July 2010 - 12:35 PM
It's pretty, though with lighting that strong some of it would be visible on her. Right now her face and body are very neutral, but that lighting would be affecting her strongly. Another thing to consider is that it looks like her natural lighting is coming from above- see the top of her hand/arm. Good lighting isn't just a nice, bright spot on your canvas- good lighting pays attention to the stock's natural lighting and compliments that and other effects.
Definitely keep it up, though!
Definitely keep it up, though!
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#3 Posted 30 July 2010 - 02:04 PM
What Becky said about lighting is very important in all graphics. In this case, maybe you could even use the lighting not only to enhance the stock, but the background. The background is a little bland, and while the stock stands out more because of it, it feels like there is just too much empty space. The right side of the signature looks nice, it's mostly the left side that I feel has this "empty space" problem. Overall, it looks pretty and it's a great start to what could be an even cooler graphic! It reminds me of a snowy day and the random dots are oh-so pretty an effect. ^^ I'd like to see more from you~
It reminds me of a snowy day and the random dots are oh-so pretty an effect. ^^ I'd like to see more from you~
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#4 Posted 30 July 2010 - 03:05 PM
What's being said already is basically solid.
For lighting you really need to not only pay attention to your light source, but what the light source is touching. You could try dodging the areas the light should be hitting, and burning the areas away from the light.
Also you need to pay attention to WHERE your light source needs to be. Here the natural lighting looks like it's coming from the top right. Forced lighting can often times cause contrast issues. Keep at it though! We'd love to see more from you.
For lighting you really need to not only pay attention to your light source, but what the light source is touching. You could try dodging the areas the light should be hitting, and burning the areas away from the light.
Also you need to pay attention to WHERE your light source needs to be. Here the natural lighting looks like it's coming from the top right. Forced lighting can often times cause contrast issues. Keep at it though! We'd love to see more from you.
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#5 Posted 30 July 2010 - 09:51 PM
I really like the stock. It seems very lovely.
The light source is kinda flat looking, maybe put some dodge/burn on the stock, and maybe even some shadows like Jade shown us on Team View that one time. Cx
The light source is kinda flat looking, maybe put some dodge/burn on the stock, and maybe even some shadows like Jade shown us on Team View that one time. Cx
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